because OR bonus 1 is taking a little while I decided I’d share the scrapped script this one was scrapped because I didn’t like it and I feel like it gave literally nothing to the main storyline and I also kept cringing at it I can’t write romance and it felt really really rushed but anyway here you go oh also reveal on how my scripts work woah warning they’re very unserious very cool tn by @rigatoni_orsomething btw (the Alliance of the Skies; Snowstar is sitting at the edge of a forest. a falcon flies towards her and her ears perk) The falcon (in Silversky’s voice): dear Snowstar, The falcon: hi :D The falcon: I miss you :( The falcon: yours truly, Sil (Snowstar smiles fondly at the falcon. It tilts its head at her) Snowstar: oh—right. Snowstar: dearest Silversky, Snowstar: I will come visit soon, I promise Snowstar: there has just been a lot on my plate Snowstar: how is Rainstorm? does he still.. not favor me? is Rainstar doing well? Snowstar: keep in mind that you are not allowed not to use falcons without a specific purpose, Sil. Snowstar: stay safe. Starclan is out there. Snowstar: sincerely, Snowstar (The falcon stands there for a second before flying away. Snowstar frowns) (Brookshadow suddenly appears behind her) Brookshadow (smugly): ooooooohhhh who was that falcon from? (Snowstar jumps when he speaks) Snowstar: GOD— Brook— I’d appreciate it if you wouldn’t startle me like that. that.. was no one. Brookshadow: first of all, don’t call me Brook. Brookshadow: second of all, I know when people are lying, Snowstar Brookshadow: and it doesn’t help that you’re not good at it Snowstar: well, either way, it does not concern you. (She turns her back to him) Brookshadow: come onnnnn Snowy! Snowstar: let it go Brookshadow. Brookshadow: you know me, I never let things go!!! Snowstar: sighggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Snowstar: it was Silversky Brookshadow: oooooooooooooohhhhhhh Brookshadow: you’re messaging your giiiirllllfriiiieeeenddddd Snowstar: she is NOT my girlfriend. what could have ever given you that idea. (Brookshadow looks at her) Brookshadow: a lot Brookshadow: (Rainstorm told me you guys were a thing) Snowstar: ..look, I shall prove to you we are not in fact a “thing.” Brookshadow: oh, yeah? how? (Snowstar looks away in frustration) (Black screen; a week later) (Brookshadow, Sparrowstar, Mousenose, and Snowstar are in a field. The throuple is laying together and Snowstar is just like nearby. A falcon flies towards them and Brookshadow lifts his head) Brookshadow: OMG SNOWY LOOK Snowstar: …it might not be for me, Brookshadow. calm your tail. Brookshadow: ugghhh Sparrowstar: come on, Fawn! who else would it be for? Mousenose: to be fair, you DO get falcons all the time.. (Snowstar’s face turns run so everyone reds /j but her face turns red so she looks away) (Ok the falcon is there now) The falcon (in Silversky’s voice): dear Snowstar, Brookshadow: told ya The falcon: I forgot what you said before about the falcon and I don’t really care! The falcon: Rainstar is doing just fine! he also says he wants to see you again The falcon: as for Rainstorm.. well he’s been avoiding me too, I wouldn’t know The falcon: are you coming here soon? you’ve been saying you would visit for months The falcon: I get you’re busy.. you’re a leader and all… but.. The falcon: ok, I say this all the time, but I miss you a lot, Snowstar The falcon: just,. let me know ok? The falcon: yours truly (again), Sil Snowstar: … Brookshadow: ooooohh yours truly? Snowstar: we—w-we cannot know what she meant when she put that in. Snowstar: that could be platonic. or professional. (Everyone stares at her with unimpressed looks on their faces. Snow’s face is red again) Sparrowstar: ok. so that’s just a lie. Mousenose: she also says she misses you a lot Snowstar: ok shush I need to send her a reply (She clears her throat) Snowstar: dear Silversky, Snowstar: Brookshadow keeps pestering me. tell him to stop. Brookshadow: no I’m not Snowstar: Brookshadow. Snowstar: ..I will visit soon, I swear. there’s just… a lot to do on this side of the Alliance. Snowstar: also, I will remind you what I said: stop sending falcons for no real reason. really. I don’t want to have to punish you. Sparrowstar: hey, no, that’s my job! Snowstar: shush. Snowstar: I— Sparrowstar: are you guys in love Snowstar: SPARROWSTAR. Snowstar: …ahem. ignore them. I think that is enough for now. (The falcon flies away after a second) Snowstar: my lord you all are awful. (Black screen; a few weeks later) (Snowstar, Sparrowstar, and Brookshadow are all sitting in a circle. Gwendolyn is there too because why not) Gwendolyn: yea there’s quite a few Sparrowstar: ok thanks for telling us Gwenny Gwendolyn: don’t call me that Sparrowstar: ok (Gwendolyn walks away. Snowstar sighs) Sparrowstar: something wrong? Snowstar: no, everything is perfectly fine, Sparrowstar. (She is comically frowning) Sparrowstar: something’s definitely up. what is it [cont. in notes in credits]
(Snowstar glances at Brookshadow. Sparrowstar does too) Sparrowstar: ok get out Brookshadow. girl talk. (He opens his mouth) Sparrowstar: and NO you are not close enough. don’t even say that about yourself Brookshadow: ughhhhh fine (He walks away. Sparrowstar turns to Snowstar) Sparrowstar: ok, what’s bothering you Snowstar: …before I begin talking, can you swear to me you won’t tell a single soul about this? Sparrowstar: yeah sure Snowstar: ..all right. (She takes a deep breath) Snowstar: I feel like I am failing Silversky. Sparrowstar: uh what Snowstar: you were there when I received that falcon, were you not? Snowstar: she keeps asking if I am able to visit her on the other side of the Alliance. Snowstar: it’s.. not like I do not want to see her, it’s just.. Snowstar: after all that I did when I was alive, I am too scared to show my face there. or maybe too ashamed? both? I’m not fully sure. Snowstar: but I cannot tell her that because she give tell me a long speech about how everyone deserves a second chance and she’s sure they will forgive me. Snowstar: because I know she is wrong. Snowstar: I.. am not sure what to do. it has been months since I’ve last seen her face, and I feel awful about that. Snowstar: and it doesn’t help at all that you three are always bugging me about her and I. we are allies. maybe friends. I don’t want that to be interpreted any other way. Sparrowstar: …well. this is.. a lot to unpack. Snowstar: also, please note I am only telling you this because I trust you to give me.. adequate advice. and also not to tell anybody. Sparrowstar: mhm.. well uh first, Sparrowstar: ok yeah you were like a really really bad person Sparrowstar: so I won’t be surprised if people don’t forgive you Sparrowstar: but yknow what, why does that matter? Sparrowstar: if they don’t want to forgive you, it’s their loss. you’re a great cat now. but once again, I can see why they would be hesitant to trust you again. Sparrowstar: you kinda were known to start wars for no reason and you also tried starting an empire that one time.. Sparrowstar: BUT we all forgave Brookshadow and he basically did the same thing Sparrowstar: I’m sure Silvie would understand if you just. told her this. but I think it would be good for you if you were around cats other than Brookshadow, Mousey and I Sparrowstar: and if you want us to stop with the you and Silversky thing, I can tell the others.. we never wanted to make you uncomfortable so I’m sure they’d listen Sparrowstar: well. maybe not Brookshadow but he’s just an idiot (Snowstar smiles) Snowstar: then how come you two always stick around him? Sparrowstar: my god why am I always asked this.. Sparrowstar: you know why Snowstar. don’t start now.. Snowstar: okay, okay. (She turns away and looks at the leaves above them) Snowstar: hmm. do you hear that as well? Sparrowstar: uhh, yeah. is it a falcon maybe? (A falcon appears) Sparrowstar: bingo Snowstar: …don’t say that Sparrowstar: ok (They both turn to the falcon) The falcon (in Silversky’s voice): hey Snowstar, The falcon: it’s been a while since I’ve heard from you The falcon: I’m worried about you The falcon: I’ve barely seen you since.. (There’s a second of silence) The falcon: I know you said you just needed time to think and we would talk about it later The falcon: but The falcon: it’s been five months since that, Snowstar The falcon: I’m starting to think you’re avoiding me The falcon: please just… The falcon: please.. (Snowstar looks distressed) The falcon: ..say something The falcon: please The falcon: take responsibility for once in your life The falcon: I The falcon: ..nevermind (Snowstar stands there, waiting for the falcon to say something else, but it doesn’t) Sparrowstar: …Fawn? (Snowstar doesn’t say anything else either) Sparrowstar: is.. there something you wanna tell me…? Snowstar (quietly): received (The falcon flies away) (Snowstar stands there in silence for a second) Snowstar: no, Sparrowstar. that is all I wanted to say. Snowstar: I.. will take your words into consideration. (She walks away. Sparrowstar looks worried) (Black screen; a few days later) (Sparrowstar walks up to Snowstar who is sleeping in the field) Sparrowstar: pssst. Fawn. (Snowstar wakes up) Snowstar: ugh.. what could you possibly need at this hour, Sparrowstar… Sparrowstar: time doesn’t pass here. also I need you to check the border with the Dark Forest. Snowstar: wh— why me?? can’t you get Brookshadow or Mousenose to do that? Sparrowstar: they’re busy Snowstar: how about that idiot Lionspirit? Sparrowstar: she lives on the other side of the field, Snowstar (Snowstar sighs) Snowstar: fine(tm) (Black screen) (Snowstar is walking along the Dark Forest border when she sees a cat in the distance) Snowstar (grumpily): isn’t this just lovely.. Snowstar (shouting): you, get back to your side of the— (She stops in her tracks) Snowstar: oh. [cont. in a note inside the project]
