Eyes, eyes everywhere He can not remember how he came He has not gained knowledge of that yet..... Suddenly everything starts to crumble and two figures are shown: a cursor and a red entity. Then everything fades to white. He wakes up, sweating. This is who will refer to as "Yerj". Yerj looks around him and all he can see is vast darkness. He gets up and starts to walk about this landscape. It looks like a valley of night. There is nothing he can see but hills far away and a bright sphere shaped object floating up in the sky. He yells out to the sky above, "Hello?" "Is anyone here?". No one came. He started to walk through the valley and after a couple of minutes went by, he started to see things that were not there. He saw eyes with wings floating in the sky ,but when he blinked they vanished. He also started gaining memories that he had never had but thought they sounded familiar. He saw a white void in these memories and saw objects floating around him getting thrown his way. "Hey! Over here!" Yerj snapped out of his hallucinations and saw a figure waving at him. It looked tall and was wearing a weird crescent moon shaped helmet. It started to walk toward toward him. "Hey are you lost too?" Yerj answered "Yes, but who the heck are you?" They zoned out for a bit and then their eyes glowed to a redish color and answered "Vleox!" Yerj then saw a quick vision of Vleox being slashed right in the chest and fading away. Yerj fell down and gasped for air, the image was too graphic to comprehend for him. "A-are you okay?", Vleox asked worried. Yerj started to see things again and then he saw a lonely cursor at a house, knocking on the house's door. Yerj then passed out and it all faded to black.....
Another him by toy fox Let me know what I should work on with my writing ^^ ( that means like capitalization and using words that make sense and etc.)