------------------------------Hansel and Gretel -------------- *this is retold by Greenville in their own gory way* Once upon a time there was a boy named Hansel. and girl named Gretel. This story starts before Hansel and Gretel was born. Their dad had shot his own child with a gun. When the mom had woke up she was so very sad, so she broke up with him. And married a man named Joe. *I think this is fair he killed her child with a gun. But the people in Greenville says that it is not fair to the man even know he killed her child.* He married a woman named Marry. Who was kind and sweet and they had Hansel, Gretel and Mack. Hansel grew to the age of 8. Gretel grew to the age of 11 and Mack grew to the age of 2 months. One night the mom said to the dad "Take care of Mack for me" as she went off to bed. Mack cried when the mom handed Mack to the dad. "STOP YOUR WEEPING" But Mack did not understand. He kept crying and crying. The dad kept yelling stop! But nothing worked. Then the dad pointed his finger at the baby and then BANG! The baby turned into a crow. The dad went up to grab his shotgun. He shot his shotgun. BANG! This time he missed and the crow-baby had flew out of the house. *you might think that this is not Hansel and Gretel's tale but soon it will become more like Hansel and Gretel.*
hope you liked my chapter 2 part 1 of this gory book I loved writing it. THANKS TO: ai I did not use ai to write this book. but gemini did edit this book but did not change any of the words @Abelincoln16thPrez for the idea of publishing a book on scratch tales dark and Grimm for idea of making a book like this
