Holy coww I spent so much time on this- And it was worth it- I think? First time doing water and reflections! In her reflection she sees what she would've become if she'd stayed.... My script: part 3 "down where the water meets the legs of the dock" show the character looking down and then there paw touches the water wich makes the reflection go away. "The things you just wouldn't notice" show just the head and neck of the character and then the river russing.
This is actually still a wip, but that first animation took more time than I'd expected- So I might have to shorten the next one /: (DONE) So the plot is that Brightheart, after one look at the dogs turned and fled only to realize that one dog was giving pursuit. She couldn't lead this dog to her sleeping clan! So she runs without knowing where she's going and comes to the river. Having no choice she jumps in and swims across. The dog doesn't follow but she barely makes it out on the other side. There, a Riverclan patrol finds her and she joins RiverClan because she's too ashamed to go back to Thunderclan. She wants them to think her dead and that she died a hero instead of turning and running like a coward. So she hides in Riverclan, but wont tell them anything. CrookedStar mentions an apprentice at the next gathering and Thunderclan wonders what they mean. Riverclan, not understanding Brightheart's urgency to not be seen by ThunderClan sends her on a patrol along the ThunderClan border to test her loyalty. A ThunderClan patrol sees her a think she's a Starclan cat. She turns and runs into RiverClan territory before they can see that she's not. She confesses everything to CrookedStar when the patrol reported back what had happened. He felt sympathy towards her and let her join RiverClan, on the exception that she wouldn't hide from her clan and tell them what happened. So she went to the next gathering and ThunderClan is really mad at her, all except Cloudtail who feels betrayed. (To be continued)
