ok so... The Fading Dawn is not continuing, if that wasn't obivious. I'm gonna finish it off and explain it all here. Spoilers... Duh. Ok so, let explain the universe, this is what you would have found out in later chapters. The universe where TwirlingStream is TwirlingStream isn't real. we'll call it the 'Dark'. in the 'Light', she's HawkStar. MossStar was gonna be calling something like LeafPelt in the 'Light' and was Hawk's mate. The tn's had significance too. The one with a yellow hollow circle is in the dark. the full yellow circle is in the light. the purle hollow circle was in the dark with THE cat. THE cat was a dark forest cat. It'll make more sense. There was long ago, a cat. He was ruthless and became deputy one day. but the leader was taking too long to oof for him, so he became impatient. He walked them to the river and pushed them in. the leader knew what would happen. so instead of sending the deputy's soul to the darkforest, they made an afterlife for his soul. An uncanny replica of the light, and when any cat looks in that same river in the dark, they see his face in their reflection, and if they're patient enough to stick around, it changes to that of the leader. Some how the deputy found a way to pull other cats into his prison, which was the dark, by hiding it as a sickness. A cat gets the sickness, coughs a bit, then a voice tauments them, telling them to sleep. the voice of the deputy. then the next time they go to sleep, they enter the dark. Then the deputy began taking the souls sent to the dark, almost as ransom, to make the souls of the light pay. the souls of starclan, mainly. Now in the end Hawk/Twirl would find out, tell Moss in the dark and they'd somehow lock the deputy's soul further or something. i didn't really get to that part. so yeah. thanks for reading the chapters and now the end. i've been meaning to do this.
