I actually just started on this story! Only on the first chapter. harsh critiques and tips are welcome! entry in project. just the prologue, if you don’t mind ^^ I would not like to share my personal story idea on scratch in case someone tries to steal. Just for context : This is in the POV of the antagonist, thinking about his late wife who was corrupted by a power she could not control. Everyone with this power, which I call Parallelisms, eventually either get consumed and die by their Parallelism or they grow bitter and evil, which is what is happening to him. “Augmentisms” are the abilities that are “normal” and not corrupted. And in summary, all power, no matter if they are “normal” are not, corrupt the user. The Augmented slowly become arrogant and The Parallels become bitter and resentful. Idk. If you need more details I’d be happy to share!
