Here are some constructive criticism for your lines! 1) For all the times after this, please record about 2-3 takes for each line, as it makes it easier when I am looking it over. 2) For the first line, when Sing shouts "SIX!!!", Sing isn't calling Sixpence, as I feel the tone in your voice is implying, Sing is excited and happy to see them after being separated for so long. 3) Finally, for line 5, Sing is very nervous and scared, so I'd appreciate it if you could perhaps make your voice quiver a bit, or take a nervous tone. If you could remix with the changes, that'll be great! (please don't delete any of the voice lines that I kept)
