Umm, so I’m canceling The Dead. Sorry, its just kind of a stupid comic I started out of determination to get popular ToT It has a bad plot, and I didn’t even plan it out before drawing it X’D Soooo, yeah, here’s the plot I made up for the first few chapters ToT Chapter one; Meet Silverpaw and Frost, Silverpaw thinks Frost is evil since he was a rogue before he came to camp (stereotyping, wow) Chapter two; Silverpaw meets Foxpaw, and she gets back to camp. Chapter three; she has FLASHBACKS to her sad childhood. Chapter four; silverpaw goes to a gathering is socially awkward, meets her friends, and gets dreams whenever Minnowstar steps into the scene. Chapter five; Silverpaw goes hunting she is called back to camp, Songstar is mad cuz she was late, they fight and Silverpaw gets exiled (sure why not LOL) She finds Black Locust and he takes her to his barn. Pirate is telling a story to the kits, Winter, Summer, Spring, and Autumn. Silverpaw asked what story that was and Pirate tells her. She passes out after hearing the name of the clan. She thinks back on her dream while hunting for some food. It was a prophecy dream from The Dark Forest about Minnowstar. That’s chapter 9 summary. After that Silverpaw talks to Pirate about where he gets his stories. He tells her he gets it from the rogue cats in town. Silverpaw tells him to taker her there. Pirate obliges. He takes her their. There is a trust twist in the story, Frost helps Silverpaw in the end with Minnowstar. Minnowstar’s side territory gets burned by a fire, and Minnowstar makes a plan to pretend they’re camp got burned and go to, umm, Silverpaw’s clan (I forgot the name) She stays their with her clan after Songstar allowed her their (Also Songstar is Silverpaw’s mother who rejected her as a kit). Minnowstar suddenly attacked at night, but Silverpaw and Frost had saved the queens kits and elders before that. Songstar lets her back in the clan and gives Silverpaw (Silvercloud) a warrior name for her bravery, and apologizes for her mistrust. Songstar wants to give Frost a warrior name, but he declines and says he wants to be a medicine cat. Songstar lets him be a med cat, and he becomes an apprentice to Mistywhisker. Awful ik ToT I actually might start a new comic, once I get better at art, and actually plan something—! Uhh, thanks for reading <33 -Melon
Art; Watermelon_Pandas
