hi guys i have feedback for your work in progress comics --------------------------------------------------------------- table of contents: 1: title feedback 2: first chapter 3: tnes --------------------------------------------------------------- 1: abt titles, i sometimes see comics and they have these very sterotypical titles like, A Cold Flame- or A Beam Of Glistening Moonlight. chat when i see that it doesnt make me want to read it, if someone was just doomscrolling and they saw that it would not make them want to read that, like bru its so sterotypical when i see that i think 'omg lol its like everyone warriors fanfic' so yknow what names that acc hint to the story in a way draws me or just something that acc 90 percent relates to ur comic, or just kinda lighthearted --------------------------------------------------------------- 2: nowww we have story intros, one of my pet peeves is when the author plunges just into this huge play of like the whole clan or smth-- when u do that it gives my adhd brain a whole lots of names to remember BUT when someone does that, thier intro is most likely a thing like, "MOSSKIT I GOT A MOUSE!!," Mosskit says jumping in happyness sterotypicaly. "WOW GYATT JOB MOSSY!," Sunshadow says blushing weirdly like that spottedleaf x firepaw ship like bro gimmi the lore like i dont need to see these kits tlaikng abt how mouse taste yummy so i need to see the lore first --hear me out, 'good' sounds like gyatt --------------------------------------------------------------- 3; short bc im lazy-- make them with bright colors to stand out, byeeeeeeee
alos guys plz dont put the gay cats in ur comics im not homophobic but cats r not meant to be gay or trans or pan, OR JUST BI so plz dude
